Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Executions and assassinations in the West Bank and Jerusalem

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The following discussion is an archived debate of the proposed deletion of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was delete‎. Seeing as not being ready for mainspace was not an issue brought up by anyone supporting deletion, it is unclear how draftifying would be an appropriate outcome. plicit 14:56, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Executions and assassinations in the West Bank and Jerusalem (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views) – (View log | edits since nomination)
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the whole article is OR and synth. it starts with Jesus, who is reffered here as "King of Martyrs", then goes to Eichmann, then to Jewish and Palestinian terrorr attacks. The whole article is cherry-picking, and the implied comparison of Jesus, Eichmann, and "The Martyr Abu Ali Mustafa" (sic!) is OR. There are enough articles on the subject (List of Israeli assassinations, List of Palestinian suicide attacks, etc) and there is no need for another synth one.

and it completely fails NPOV : "An eye for an eye", "King of Martyrs", "he refused to commit sin unto the point of shedding blood", "The Martyr Abu Ali Mustafa", "prominent militant", etc Artem.G (talk) 13:38, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It's not weird to leave it out, it doesn't really fit and you got the "implied comparison" and offense at the language type stuff. Edit add: I think the request was insulting to you. Sammy D III (talk) 04:29, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Sammy D III Ok. I'll delete that one then. Including and excluding both seem weird, so one opinion is enough to be a deciding factor. MWQs (talk) 04:44, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Which request was insulting to who? MWQs (talk) 04:45, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
First, I am a "Delete" four below this. I don't mean to double-comment. I'm also commenting on the article before you messed with it, it's pretty bad form to change during a discussion. Very bad form.
"the whole article is OR and synth" yet none of either are shown. "it starts with Jesus", which is chronically correct. That section seemed respectful to him and the Catholics. "the implied comparison of Jesus, Eichmann, and" (my italics) is quite a stretch, to put it mildly. Jesus may have been wrong to use, but Eichmann is absolutely necessary. I agree that "There are enough articles" but "another synth one" is a cheap shot. I agree that "it completely fails NPOV" but I believe that is probably your writing, not a political position.
It seems that you have problems outside, maybe that is leaking in, but I AGF you here. I'm still Delete, though. Sammy D III (talk) 06:56, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Delete as unnecessary, every section has a "Main article" or "See also". I don't see that NPOV or OR problems are clear. I do see NPOV problems but I don't see them as deliberately pushing a position. The editor is interesting but I'm commenting on what's here. Sammy D III (talk) 02:00, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Am I allowed to move things to draft space myself if someone nominates one of my articles and I agree it's not ready for mainspace? MWQs (talk) 01:12, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Not while an AfD is ongoing, no; for the same reason pages shouldn't be moved at all during AfDs. Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 01:15, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The above discussion is preserved as an archive of the debate. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as the article's talk page or in a deletion review). No further edits should be made to this page.