Talk:The X-Files Mythology, Volume 4 – Super Soldiers/GA1

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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 22:32, 6 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Link Fox
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"seventh season" of the show?
I'm not sure what you want here. If you are suggesting I add "of the show" after 'seventh season', this is redundant, as the sentence already reads "...quit full-time participation in the show after the seventh season."--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Seems a bit too small. Any way of expanding?
There's really not much else out there in terms of reviews. This is the unloved DVD collection.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

# should no be used per MOS: guidelines. Use "No. in series" and "No. in season"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
# should not be used twice
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
U.S. viewers should be added.
This is a DVD release of specific episodes, not a season, so the viewership wouldn't be appropriate.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Don't have country flags per MOS:FLAG
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Change the country to regions 1, 2, 3, 4, etc.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Set Details should be Set details, per MOS:CAPS
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Special Features should be Special features, per MOS:CAPS
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
- should be an en-dash per WP:DASH. It is for two in "Special features" at the special features area.
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Release Dates should be Release dates, per MOS:CAPS
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Add sub-sections for "Footnotes" and "Bibliography", per MOS:ACCESS
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 33: IGN is missing publisher (News Corporation)
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
In some references, Fox Home Entertainment should be 20th Century Fox Home Entertainment
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 40 is missing publisher (Time Inc)
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 41 is missing publisher (The New York Times Company)
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Ref. 42 is missing publisher (The Onion)
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

- should be an en-dash per WP:DASH. It is before "4"
Done.--Gen. Quon (Talk) 15:47, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

That's all. Great work on the page; on hold for now. TBran dl ey 05:33, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Great! I have tweaked the article, and will pass the nomination. Excellent work. TBran dl ey 16:00, 13 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]