Talk:The World Needs a Hero/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Bruce Campbell (talk · contribs) 04:44, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I will review the article. Comments coming soon. Bruce Campbell (talk) 04:44, 13 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Out of the two current Megadeth articles I'm reviewing I think this is the much stronger one. Fewer comments:

General

Move the songs section so its before release, maybe try combining the release and reception sections so its one, like "release and reception." Done--L1A1 FAL (talk) 02:33, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Same comment as in the The System Has Failed review; content discussion of some of the songs is slightly sparse.
Background section is already a little sparse; maybe get rid of the album title subsection, just make it one section.( Done--L1A1 FAL (talk) 02:33, 16 October 2012 (UTC)) Another comment, but by no means critical; Mustaine talks about the history of the album alot in his book. If you have a copy of the book or a way to access the information, there's alot there that could flesh out the article.[reply]

Personnel and bellow

No need to reference every single personnel credit individuality. Look what is done at Channel Orange, that's a better example of how it can be done. Done--L1A1 FAL (talk) 02:47, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]
The charts aren't quite done properly; take a look at how they're done at Channel Orange for example, the full charts need to be written out. Done--L1A1 FAL (talk) 03:07, 16 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Article has some issues before it can be passed. If you have any trouble or concerns let me know. Bruce Campbell (talk) 21:45, 15 October 2012 (UTC)[reply]