Talk:Since U Been Gone/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) Hello, I will be reviewing this article. 17:14, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

Thanks a lot :) — My December ^(talk) 22:01, 1 April 2012 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Infobox

• Use {{duration|m=3|s=08}}  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• I'm not so sure that we list certifications in the info box now. I will check.
• No other issues.

Lead

• "It is an uptempo pop" → Link uptempo and pop  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "incorporates electronic sound" → What do you mean by this? Perhaps link to clarify  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "alternative-rocks sound." → I don't think there should be an "s" on rocks, but should be at the end of "sound" ?  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "little bit poppy." → Is this a quote? If not, then another word should be found for "poppy"  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "It is an uptempo pop song which incorporates electronic that is infused with a dichotomy of soft and loud alternative-rocks sound." → You said this a few sentences ago. Repetition.  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "The song received critical acclaim from critics" → The song garnered positive reviews from [[Music journalism|music critics]]  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "The song received critical acclaim from critics who considered the song as the highlight of Breakaway. Critics also felt that the song is one of the best pop songs in the last decade. The song was a commercial success." → Spot what is a mistake here.  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "for selling over one million digital downloads." → denoting shipments of over one million copies sold  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• " the song won the award for"  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "At the 48th Grammy Awards, the song won Best Female Pop Vocal Performance." → Why has this been plonked in the middle of the chart performance bit??  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• Quite a lot of issues in this section, and I haven't even commented on the third paragraph yet. Aaron • ^{You Da One} 10:52, 2 May 2012 (UTC)
• " It has also been recognized in various forms of accolades by the music press." → Such as?  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)

Background and writing

• "In an interview with Blender magazine, both Martin and Dr. Luke revealed that while writing the song, they had Pink in their mind. Nevertheless, the singer turned it down." → In an interview for Blender, Martin and Dr. Luke revealed that they had originally intended for "Since U Been Gone" to be given to Pink, however she turned it down. (Link Blender and Pink, obvs.)  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "and it was the only song from the album not recorded in Los Angeles but in Sweden." → and was recorded in Sweden.  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "Clarkson was not convinced about the song in the first place," → At first, Clarkson was not fully convinced at the prospect of recording the song,  Done
• "little bit poppy" → re-word this  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)
• "The song was included as the opening track of the American Idol 10th Anniversary - The Hits, a compilation album that celebrates 10 years of American Idol which features tracks from nine winners of the show." → This isn't really Background or writing. I'd put in the Live performances or Covers section.  Done — My December ^(talk) 08:15, 4 May 2012 (UTC)

Composition

• A lot of the quotes are simply reviews and should be in the Critical reception section.
• Try not to use quotes for this section too much, instead picking out the bits about vocals and instrumentation and saying how they are included in the song instead of an entire thought from one critic.

Response - Critical reception

• I made a slight c/e to the section headings.
• This is just full of quotes. Paraphrase every other one into your own words.

Summary

Editor has been inactive for 15 days and current issues have not been addressed. Maybe it would be better to nominate when the editor is more active. Good luck :). Aaron • ^{You Da One} 11:35, 25 May 2012 (UTC)

Gosh. I totally forgot about this article! My apologies! I am nominating it again. — My December ^(talk) 06:35, 31 May 2012 (UTC)