Talk:One Night Stand (2007)/GA1
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[edit]- Check italics for Raw, Smackdown, etc. etc. in the lead (and everywhere else).
- The show is italicized, not the brand. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:22, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
- "After Cena accepted, Khali attacked Cena, performing a Chokebomb on him" - where did this happen?
- I think I got it. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:22, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
Like, did he say "let's do a Count Anywhere" and when Cena said "okeys", he chokebombed him then and there?
- Cena accepted Khali's challenge and then they had a confrontation, which led to Khali chokebombing him. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:33, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
- I dunno, maybe it's just me, but something doesn't seem right about the vast majority of sources being from WWE... there's nothing else?
- You still want different sources for the article? -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:59, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
- "Moments before the contest began, however, Vince announced that he was not going to be Lashley's opponent in the contest. He announced Mark Henry as his replacement" - can you use a word other than "announced"
- Would "booked" be a better word? -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:26, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
- Yep. giggy (:O) 11:18, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
- Done. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:59, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
- Yep. giggy (:O) 11:18, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
- Would "booked" be a better word? -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:26, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
- "managed to kick Orton in the head" - don't think that needs a wlink...
- Un-linked. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:28, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
- "The contest went into the crowd" - same again, I think
- You want it re-worded or something? -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:30, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
- No, just delinked, which seems to have been done. giggy (:O) 11:18, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
- It was cool to have the article explain what a stretcher match... can you do that for the other events too?
- Done for the first three. Pinfalls Count Anywhere is self-explanatory. Steel Cage match is already explained, as is Lumberjack match. And Street Fight and Pudding match can be verified through their respective wikilink. –LAX 11:59, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
- "after Kane kayfabe passed out" - what does kayfabe mean?
- See here and do you want it explained in the article? -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:30, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
- There should at least be a wlink. giggy (:O) 11:18, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
- Done. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:59, 15 June 2008 (UTC)
- There should at least be a wlink. giggy (:O) 11:18, 14 June 2008 (UTC)
- See here and do you want it explained in the article? -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 00:30, 12 June 2008 (UTC)
Rest seems good... check the sourcing issue noted above. giggy (:O)
- Unless somebody gets to it first, I'll work on this when I get home later. -- iMatthew T.C. 10:28, 11 June 2008 (UTC)
I noticed that this review has been on hold for seven days. Can you please let me know what still needs to be done? I'm sure that we (WP:PW) can make all of the necessary fixes, so I'd appreciate it if you could continue the hold. Thanks, GaryColemanFan (talk) 14:02, 19 June 2008 (UTC)
- Passing now (sorry, big watchlist). giggy (:O) 00:04, 20 June 2008 (UTC)