Talk:Charles Wilson Cross/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Help review good articles} 21:25, 31 December 2009 (UTC)

This is a nice article overall, though I did find a couple issues:

• WP:PERSONDATA should be added.
  • Done (not sure how I missed that).
• "When the idea of creating one more more new provinces out of the Northwest Territories gained currency" Not sure what you meant here, but I'm pretty sure it wasn't 'one more more'.
  • Done - changed to "one or more".
• "Cross won the election with such a margin that Griesbach lost his deposit." Deposit on what?
  • I've added a wikilink (to rather a poor article, but such is the nature of this place sometimes).
• is "to cabinet" proper? I saw it multiple times so I thought I'd ask. (as opposed to "to the cabinet")
  • Yep (many of these are to phrases like "appointed to cabinet positions", but there's also quite a few that use it in the sense that I do).

I'll put this on hold and pass when everything's fixed. Wizardman _{Help review good articles} 21:25, 31 December 2009 (UTC)

Thanks for the review. Steve Smith (talk) 02:42, 4 January 2010 (UTC)

Looks good now, article passes. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:31, 4 January 2010 (UTC)