Talk:Beat of My Drum/GA4

GA Review

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Reviewer: 11JORN (talk · contribs) 00:59, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Infobox

• No issues.

Lead

• It was released on 2 June 2011, via Polydor Records → It was released on 2 June 2011, by Polydor Records
• as the first single from Roberts's debut solo album → So lead single?
• Put (2011) after Cinderella's Eyes
• "In the United Kingdom, it charted at number 27 on the UK Singles Chart" → You could cite only the country or only the chart.

Background and development

• "She stated that she had always wanted "Beat of My Drum" to be something different from the music that her rivals were presenting in the charts" → I don't think 'rivals' can be an appropriate adjective. Maybe 'other pop singers' can be better.

Composition

• No issues.

Release

• No issues.

Critical reception

• Is the Madonna paragraph realllllly necessary?
• Unlink The Guardian, it is already listed in the background section. Also, unlink Billboard in the accolades subsection

Music video

• I made one small c/e.

Live performances

• No issues.

Formats and track-listings

• No issues.

Chart performance

• No issues.

Release history

• No issues.

References

• No issues.

Summary

On hold for 7 days. Very good job. I think we can pass it this time. 11Jorn ^talk 13:16, 4 August 2012 (UTC)

I know you're very busy and you did not answer the review. So, I've fixed these issues by myself and passed the article. 11Jorn ^talk 22:37, 9 August 2012 (UTC)