User contributions for Wozal
A user with 22,915 edits. Account created on 22 May 2022.
20 July 2024
- 19:0919:09, 20 July 2024 diff hist −560 J. D. Vance →Tenure: This is mentioned a few paragraphs down in much finer detail. Tag: Visual edit
- 18:0618:06, 20 July 2024 diff hist +524 J. D. Vance →Tenure: Addition and expansion of companion bill focused on criminalizing gender-affirming care bill which he sponsored for a bit more balance. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:5317:53, 20 July 2024 diff hist −1,162 J. D. Vance Senators work with other parties; these two are only in the introduction phase and nowhere near the enacted into law stage. Currently, this is written in a way which suggests his beliefs in a way that aren't quite accurate. This could likely benefit by talking about bills he's sponsored and passed with the GOP. Unsure about the status of the remaining 3. Tag: Visual edit
- 17:4317:43, 20 July 2024 diff hist +63 J. D. Vance Restored revision 1235684296 by Esterau16 (talk): There are 3 sources listed for this in later paragraphs. This also seems to be of importance to understanding who Vance is. Tags: Twinkle Undo Reverted
- 01:0501:05, 20 July 2024 diff hist −403 J. D. Vance →Committee assignments: Standard practice seems to be just listing the committees and subcommittees to avoid confusion. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:0101:01, 20 July 2024 diff hist −721 J. D. Vance →Early life and education: People reading authors which overlap with some of their identity is nothing new. This feels like WP:NOTNEWS We really should try avoiding blogs though Tag: Visual edit
- 00:1800:18, 20 July 2024 diff hist −179 J. D. Vance →Political positions: Without a more direct source link, this feels he/she said. Nothing makes this more notable than others. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:1400:14, 20 July 2024 diff hist +276 Talk:J. D. Vance →Clean up: Reply Tag: Reply
19 July 2024
- 20:1120:11, 19 July 2024 diff hist −61 J. D. Vance →2024 vice presidential campaign: Minus what appears to be opinion. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0520:05, 19 July 2024 diff hist −650 J. D. Vance Press releases generally aren't good sources; being a "finalist" doesn't really account for much in the publishing world, especially if no award was given. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:0020:00, 19 July 2024 diff hist −20 J. D. Vance The award listed here was for the audiobook; not for the writing of the book. However, the article doesn't merit a different section for this and most don't even mention this award even when standalone pages exist for their books. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5619:56, 19 July 2024 diff hist −83 J. D. Vance →Early life and education: Remove unneccessary/duplicate wikilinks Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5419:54, 19 July 2024 diff hist −103 J. D. Vance Focus here should be on the person; not on additional details of the book. Book details can be gotten by going to the dedicated wikipedia article. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:5219:52, 19 July 2024 diff hist +5 J. D. Vance Simplify as most articles do when talking about their high schools. No need to use extra words when more direct words can be used. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:1619:16, 19 July 2024 diff hist −45 J. D. Vance Looking at other articles which include this, this tends to not be wikilinked. Tag: Visual edit
- 19:0919:09, 19 July 2024 diff hist +287 Talk:J. D. Vance →Requested move 18 July 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
- 02:2902:29, 19 July 2024 diff hist +10,223 Ohio State University Rescuing 57 sources and tagging 0 as dead.) #IABot (v2.0.9.5 current Tag: IABotManagementConsole [1.3]
- 02:1302:13, 19 July 2024 diff hist −745 Ohio State University Very outdated. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:1202:12, 19 July 2024 diff hist −351 Ohio State University →Research: That's not quite what the source said. Tag: Visual edit
- 02:0902:09, 19 July 2024 diff hist −2,308 Ohio State University Alumni and staff are generally in either the alumni section or sometimes on a "list of" people associated with the university as either alumni, staff, or faculty. There's no need for them to be in other sections. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5901:59, 19 July 2024 diff hist −1,286 Ohio State University This just feels like college brochure material. Removed some academic boosterism. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5401:54, 19 July 2024 diff hist −2,129 Ohio State University A lot of colleges have honor programs. There was no sources here nor anything which would make this notable. This just sounded like a college brochure. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:5101:51, 19 July 2024 diff hist −67 Ohio State University →Rankings and recognition: Dividing schools into public vs private is often seen as selective ranking to booster rankings. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:4901:49, 19 July 2024 diff hist −224 Ohio State University →Campus: Claim not supported by source. Tag: Visual edit
- 01:4001:40, 19 July 2024 diff hist +2 J. D. Vance Per MOS:US, "retain U.S. in American or Canadian English articles in which it is already established, unless there is a good reason to change it". U.S. follows what has been established for infoboxes in these American English articles. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
18 July 2024
- 21:0721:07, 18 July 2024 diff hist −49 J. D. Vance removed Category:American financial company founders using HotCat No indication that he founded any financial companies; that differs from providing funding via being a venture capitalist.
- 21:0321:03, 18 July 2024 diff hist +30 J. D. Vance added Category:Kentucky lawyers using HotCat
- 21:0221:02, 18 July 2024 diff hist −26 J. D. Vance removed Category:Ohio lawyers using HotCat This category is for those who practiced law in Ohio; there's no indication he's ever practiced law in Ohio but there is proof he practiced law in Kentucky.
- 20:5820:58, 18 July 2024 diff hist −30 J. D. Vance WP:UNITHE + references don't need to be wikilinked every time. Tag: Visual edit
- 20:5420:54, 18 July 2024 diff hist +193 Talk:J. D. Vance →College attended: Reply Tag: Reply
- 15:0915:09, 18 July 2024 diff hist −511 J. D. Vance →Early life and education: This source does not make any mention of the 2nd Marine Aircraft Wing which it claims to support. Tag: Visual edit
- 15:0115:01, 18 July 2024 diff hist +308 Talk:J. D. Vance →Requested move 18 July 2024: Reply Tag: Reply
- 06:3206:32, 18 July 2024 diff hist +7,715 J. D. Vance Rescuing 43 sources and tagging 0 as dead.) #IABot (v2.0.9.5 Tag: IABotManagementConsole [1.3]
17 July 2024
- 23:2623:26, 17 July 2024 diff hist −2,971 J. D. Vance This isn't really notable There are 50 states; There have been 45 presidents (Grover Cleveland was 22nd and 24th). Some states haven't had a president; some haven't had a vice president. Facial hair is also temporary so having a "first" on that seems silly and unnecessary. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:1023:10, 17 July 2024 diff hist −40 J. D. Vance These two have nothing to do with each other and makes for a very odd sentence. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:0023:00, 17 July 2024 diff hist +8 J. D. Vance Undid revision 1235154229 by Thirdhuman (talk) That's not the correct use for a minor change. Tag: Undo
- 22:4722:47, 17 July 2024 diff hist −62 J. D. Vance →Early life and education: Replaced with more neutral secondary source. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:4222:42, 17 July 2024 diff hist −373 J. D. Vance Citing the equivalent of Cliffsnotes which cites the original source there seems unnecessary. Tag: Visual edit
- 22:3822:38, 17 July 2024 diff hist −143 J. D. Vance Referencing something nonfactual in an autobiography is tricky because it can't be verified and are often biased in only the most favorable of terms. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:4700:47, 17 July 2024 diff hist +2 J. D. Vance AOL had more than one founder. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:1500:15, 17 July 2024 diff hist +290 J. D. Vance →Early career: + Source for law clerk Tag: Visual edit
- 00:1100:11, 17 July 2024 diff hist −203 J. D. Vance →Early life and education: This appears to be a direct quote from the original source which also that these awards would have been typical for his time served; there's nothing that would mark these as unusual. It wouldn't make sense to include these for every Marine who served. Tag: Visual edit
- 00:0400:04, 17 July 2024 diff hist +5 J. D. Vance →Early life and education: He was a Marine; that much is established. No need to add extra words when it's clear that this award is from them. Tag: Visual edit
16 July 2024
- 23:5323:53, 16 July 2024 diff hist −724 J. D. Vance →Immigration and border security: This seems to be from an opinion piece, rather than a direct quote from him. Tag: Visual edit
- 23:4723:47, 16 July 2024 diff hist −656 J. D. Vance Merge duplicate source. Tag: Visual edit
14 July 2024
- 13:5513:55, 14 July 2024 diff hist +822 Babson College + Sources current Tag: Visual edit
- 13:4813:48, 14 July 2024 diff hist −908 Babson College →Graduate program: Simplify. Also, not quite what the sources state. Even the median # is a bit wonky since it's not confirmed, is after 10 years of the workforce, and is self-reported on Payscale. No source mentions whether it's the highest. Tag: Visual edit
- 13:4113:41, 14 July 2024 diff hist −184 Babson College →Athletics: Not notable. Colleges generally continue to build things. Tag: Visual edit
- 13:4013:40, 14 July 2024 diff hist −28 Babson College Simplify. Tag: Visual edit
- 13:3913:39, 14 July 2024 diff hist −641 Babson College ce, clarity and undue detail. Tag: Visual edit