User contributions for Flash335i
A user with 105 edits. Account created on 6 January 2016.
4 February 2016
- 17:1417:14, 4 February 2016 diff hist +10 The Wheel on the School Added ISBN number. 10 digit format
- 17:1317:13, 4 February 2016 diff hist +461 The Wheel on the School Added a theme section and edited
- 17:0417:04, 4 February 2016 diff hist +574 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added a theme section!
- 16:5116:51, 4 February 2016 diff hist +5 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added the word, "that" because it shows what the king was mad about, rather than just saying he was just mad
- 16:5016:50, 4 February 2016 diff hist +24 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added a new sentence to the plot, because the first sentence was way too long.
- 16:4816:48, 4 February 2016 diff hist +1 User:Flash335i/sandbox Comma to give the reader a brief pause, "still spoke about, 'The year...'"
- 16:4716:47, 4 February 2016 diff hist +1 User:Flash335i/sandbox Removed the word "talk" and replaced it with "spoke", because it's not happening now, it was in the past
- 16:4716:47, 4 February 2016 diff hist +1 User:Flash335i/sandbox Changed a word from "The" to "This". Now it seems as though the book has more importance, rather than just saying, "The book"
- 16:4516:45, 4 February 2016 diff hist +3,695 User:Flash335i/sandbox Moved up a part of the text that should have been in the upper section
- 16:2316:23, 4 February 2016 diff hist +2,025 Criss Cross (novel) Significant additions in progress
- 16:2116:21, 4 February 2016 diff hist +68 User:Flash335i/sandbox {{empty section}}
- 16:1716:17, 4 February 2016 diff hist −8 User:Flash335i/sandbox Deleted unnecessary spaces to make page look more clean
- 16:1616:16, 4 February 2016 diff hist +1 User:Flash335i/sandbox Moved around the "About The Author", in order to make page look more neat
- 16:0616:06, 4 February 2016 diff hist +18 User:Flash335i/sandbox New section, "Adaptations"
- 16:0416:04, 4 February 2016 diff hist +30 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added a, "Literary Significance" section, for future editing
- 16:0316:03, 4 February 2016 diff hist +17 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added a, "Development" section, for future editors, in case they can come across more information
3 February 2016
- 16:4216:42, 3 February 2016 diff hist +386 User:Flash335i/sandbox Edited, About The Author. Found information about her and the other works that she has done.
- 16:3216:32, 3 February 2016 diff hist +24 User:Flash335i/sandbox Started a new trend.. ? ADDED, About The Author section to further inform readers about what the author is like, feelings and emotions about the book.
- 16:2016:20, 3 February 2016 diff hist +194 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added more to the Thesis section, after doing more research and finding a bit more information.
1 February 2016
- 17:2317:23, 1 February 2016 diff hist +29 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added, Publication History
- 17:0717:07, 1 February 2016 diff hist +438 User:Flash335i/sandbox No edit summary
- 16:4616:46, 1 February 2016 diff hist +13 User:Flash335i/sandbox ADDED A Theme Section
- 16:4516:45, 1 February 2016 diff hist +817 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added a completely new summary.
- 16:2116:21, 1 February 2016 diff hist −9,050 User:Flash335i/sandbox START ARTICLE
- 15:5815:58, 1 February 2016 diff hist +5,935 User talk:Flash335i/sandbox →Edits to Mramon139. Comma after One day, to give the sentence a quick pause.: new section
- 15:5515:55, 1 February 2016 diff hist +5 User talk:Flash335i/sandbox →Plot: Added a comma before they named the African slave ship. Edited the last sentence to make more sense. Added 'and' and an 's' to the word leave to make it present.
- 15:5115:51, 1 February 2016 diff hist +2,966 User talk:Flash335i/sandbox →Edits on another's work. Cut of long beginning sentence, and added a period, combined with, "He was" ...: new section
28 January 2016
- 16:1916:19, 28 January 2016 diff hist +2 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added in '...' at the end story in order to show that it continues on to the limits of the readers mind.
- 16:1416:14, 28 January 2016 diff hist +1 User:Flash335i/sandbox Comma for a brief pause in a long sentence.
- 16:1216:12, 28 January 2016 diff hist +5 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added the word "very" in order to emphasize how long and dull church services were to her.
- 16:1116:11, 28 January 2016 diff hist +3 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added a word that I believe should be there, "to" When it says, "in which she was accustomed to," ...
- 16:0916:09, 28 January 2016 diff hist −1 User:Flash335i/sandbox No edit summary
- 15:5615:56, 28 January 2016 diff hist −5 User:Flash335i/sandbox Removed an unnecessary word in a sentence. Also conjugated a word at the end to make the sentence flow more freely, from "She says that they would welcome her because she is family." To, "She says they would welcome her because she's family.
- 15:5115:51, 28 January 2016 diff hist −6 User:Flash335i/sandbox Removed the word 'small' from a sentence, because there were the repetition of that word too much later on in that same sentence.
- 15:4915:49, 28 January 2016 diff hist +1 User:Flash335i/sandbox Changed a word to a newer term, instead of there were four new passengers board the Dolphin, it sounded better as, there were four new passengers aboard the Dolphin.
- 15:4715:47, 28 January 2016 diff hist +5 User:Flash335i/sandbox Dropped a run on sentence, was way too long, so I added in a period and made the reader able to have a breath in between sentences.
- 15:4515:45, 28 January 2016 diff hist +3,210 User:Flash335i/sandbox Edited what a Puritan was, as some may not know
27 January 2016
- 17:0817:08, 27 January 2016 diff hist −1 User:Sheikh-aladdin/sandbox Conjugated who is to who's current
- 16:4916:49, 27 January 2016 diff hist +2 User:Flash335i/sandbox Error in title, THE DARK FRIGATE
- 16:4716:47, 27 January 2016 diff hist −6 User:Flash335i/sandbox Changed around the second to last sentence to make the ending more dramatic.
- 16:4216:42, 27 January 2016 diff hist −3 User:Flash335i/sandbox Switched around a few words in order to make a sentence clearer. "when he swims out to investigate it," ...
- 16:4016:40, 27 January 2016 diff hist +1 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added the word "they" to show who was being reluctant. it was unclear from the original
- 16:3916:39, 27 January 2016 diff hist +5 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added the word
- 16:3416:34, 27 January 2016 diff hist +12 User:Flash335i/sandbox Added what a 'frigate' was, as some may not know it's a type of ship
- 16:3116:31, 27 January 2016 diff hist +1,930 User:Flash335i/sandbox Removed a comma and stopped a run on sentence. Making it more clear and gives the reader a better pause, to enjoy the story further.
- 16:1516:15, 27 January 2016 diff hist −1 User talk:Ideky Removed a comma between "their lives"
- 16:0716:07, 27 January 2016 diff hist −1 User talk:Ideky "colour" was spelt wrong, changed it
- 16:0416:04, 27 January 2016 diff hist +9,063 User talk:Ideky No edit summary
- 16:0416:04, 27 January 2016 diff hist −3,694 User:Ideky/sandbox Comma was not needed between father and grandfather
- 16:0216:02, 27 January 2016 diff hist +3,274 User talk:Ideky →Cross Editing: ...And Now Miguel: new section