User contributions for Dwandelt

14 December 2023

• 16:3716:37, 14 December 2023 diff hist −5‎ Ancel Keys ‎ →‎Seven Countries Study: Minor grammatical corrections not impacting essential meaning. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

18 January 2017

• 15:4815:48, 18 January 2017 diff hist −5‎ m Technical debt ‎ Reword one sentence for clarity with no (intended) change of meaning.
• 15:1815:18, 18 January 2017 diff hist −1‎ m Software entropy ‎ Changed "increased" to "increase" in the first sentence for grammatical correctness.

29 November 2016

• 13:4313:43, 29 November 2016 diff hist 0‎ m Federated database system ‎ →‎Definition: corrected name misspelling

12 September 2016

• 14:4614:46, 12 September 2016 diff hist −1‎ m Knowledge-centered support ‎ Minor grammar correction
• 14:4414:44, 12 September 2016 diff hist +18‎ m Knowledge-centered support ‎ Minor grammar cleanup.

2 June 2016

• 17:5517:55, 2 June 2016 diff hist +40‎ m Personal identifier ‎ Style and language cleanup with no intended change of essential meaning (though it could use a bit of that, too!) Tag: Visual edit

5 May 2016

• 17:5817:58, 5 May 2016 diff hist +70‎ m Knowledge base ‎ Minor grammar cleanup; added one link to a relevant topic

29 January 2016

• 21:2921:29, 29 January 2016 diff hist +3‎ m Virtual private cloud ‎ Minor text tweaks with no (intended) change of essential meaning.

12 October 2015

• 18:3018:30, 12 October 2015 diff hist −3‎ m Telerate ‎ minor typo correction

27 March 2015

• 17:4417:44, 27 March 2015 diff hist +4‎ m Resistant starch ‎ minor grammar and style tweaks

4 March 2015

• 13:3513:35, 4 March 2015 diff hist +2‎ m Firefox OS ‎ Exceedingly minor text tweak!

15 May 2014

• 13:3813:38, 15 May 2014 diff hist +5‎ m Inductive reasoning ‎ →‎Description: minor sentence structure tweak

13 April 2014

• 10:1510:15, 13 April 2014 diff hist 0‎ m Fursuit ‎ →‎Demographics: minor grammar correction

1 March 2014

• 23:3723:37, 1 March 2014 diff hist +4‎ Glucagon-like peptide-1 ‎ Added link to glucagon article

7 February 2014

• 18:3618:36, 7 February 2014 diff hist +110‎ Talk:Maximum transmission unit ‎ →‎Ethernet MTU: Added query about Ethernet jumbo frames
• 18:3418:34, 7 February 2014 diff hist +36‎ Maximum transmission unit ‎ Reworked some text for clarity, qualified some open-ended statements.

23 January 2014

• 16:4816:48, 23 January 2014 diff hist −26‎ m Stub file ‎ Minor rewording for readability, with no intended change of essential meaning.

12 December 2013

• 14:3614:36, 12 December 2013 diff hist +1‎ m Revision Control System ‎ →‎PRCS: somebody needs to buy this writer a box of commas...
• 14:3614:36, 12 December 2013 diff hist +2‎ m Revision Control System ‎ →‎PRCS: minor punctuation tweak

14 November 2013

• 14:3514:35, 14 November 2013 diff hist +4‎ m MHTML ‎ Just added "and" to the list of resource examples.

3 July 2013

• 18:1318:13, 3 July 2013 diff hist +5‎ Interior gateway protocol ‎ just changed "makes use of" to "relies on" in the second sentence. Tag: Visual edit
• 18:1118:11, 3 July 2013 diff hist −8‎ m Interior gateway protocol ‎ Minor wording tweak
• 18:0918:09, 3 July 2013 diff hist +2‎ Interior gateway protocol ‎ Reworked opening paragraph wording to simplify and clarify; combined the three one-sentence paragraphs into a single three-sentence paragraph. Tag: Visual edit

11 April 2013

• 15:3515:35, 11 April 2013 diff hist −3‎ m Camtasia ‎ word tweak
• 15:3115:31, 11 April 2013 diff hist +23‎ Camtasia ‎ Added that audio can be recorded separately from video if desired.

5 December 2012

• 13:4013:40, 5 December 2012 diff hist −2‎ m BMW 5 Series (E60) ‎ Minor grammatical tweak
• 13:3813:38, 5 December 2012 diff hist +7‎ m BMW 5 Series (E60) ‎ →‎Development: Minor grammar correction

13 November 2012

• 15:3015:30, 13 November 2012 diff hist −39‎ Dimension table ‎ Language and presentation cleanup with no intended change of meaning. Not perfect, but better!

12 September 2012

• 15:3515:35, 12 September 2012 diff hist −12‎ m Mainframe computer ‎ →‎Description: Minor rewording and presentation changes (no essential change of meaning)

11 September 2012

• 19:3819:38, 11 September 2012 diff hist −22‎ m Job scheduler ‎ Minor language rework in paragraph 1 only (for now!).

5 September 2012

• 14:5714:57, 5 September 2012 diff hist +6‎ m Common layers in an information system logical architecture ‎ minor cleanup
• 14:5514:55, 5 September 2012 diff hist +60‎ m Multitier architecture ‎ Reworked wording to improve readability

4 September 2012

• 14:0014:00, 4 September 2012 diff hist −67‎ m Business intelligence ‎ Removed some redundancy and wordiness; added a little punctuation. No essential change in meaning intended.

29 August 2012

• 17:1617:16, 29 August 2012 diff hist −12‎ Master data ‎ Cleaned up wording of the opening summary. May have changed the meaning slightly. A true SME should verify.

28 August 2012

• 17:5217:52, 28 August 2012 diff hist +1‎ m DNS hijacking ‎ →‎Manipulation by ISPs: Added missing comma to article name.
• 14:4114:41, 28 August 2012 diff hist +11‎ m IPv6 ‎ Oops. Reread, and discovered I had unintentionally deleted something. Restored it.
• 14:3714:37, 28 August 2012 diff hist +81‎ m IPv6 ‎ Broke up overly-long sentence. No change in meaning intended.

20 August 2012

• 13:1413:14, 20 August 2012 diff hist +4‎ m Data access object ‎ Minor rework of sentence structures with no (intended) change of meaning.

21 June 2012

• 17:0017:00, 21 June 2012 diff hist +1‎ m Fibre Channel ‎ Minor grammatical tweaks

15 June 2012

• 14:2814:28, 15 June 2012 diff hist −1‎ m Uninflected word ‎ Minor grammatical correction

14 June 2012

• 20:3920:39, 14 June 2012 diff hist +7‎ m ADDIE Model ‎ →‎Analysis Phase
• 18:2618:26, 14 June 2012 diff hist 0‎ m Brian Wilson ‎ →‎Solo career: Minor tweaks
• 18:1618:16, 14 June 2012 diff hist +6‎ m Brian Wilson ‎ →‎Seclusion, comeback, and relapse: Minor tweaks.
• 18:0718:07, 14 June 2012 diff hist +1‎ m Brian Wilson ‎ →‎Onset of mental illness and drug addiction: Minor grammatical tweaks and typo corrections
• 15:4615:46, 14 June 2012 diff hist +16‎ m Tree (data structure) ‎ →‎Terminology: Minor grammatical tweak(s)

12 June 2012

• 14:1514:15, 12 June 2012 diff hist −8‎ m ADDIE Model ‎ →‎Analysis Phase: (needed a comma in the opening sentence to break up the run-on)

31 May 2012

• 15:1515:15, 31 May 2012 diff hist −1‎ m Peanut oil ‎ →‎Allergens and toxins: (ditto above, for another instance)
• 15:1415:14, 31 May 2012 diff hist −1‎ m Peanut oil ‎ →‎Allergens and toxins: Just replaced "which" with "that" as appropriate in this case.
• 13:5013:50, 31 May 2012 diff hist +1‎ m Jargon ‎ Just added a comma where it was needed to properly separate the phrases and clarify the meaning.