User contributions for Alicepow8

19 May 2024

• 19:2619:26, 19 May 2024 diff hist +10‎ m Tiamat ‎ added a link to one of the monsters' own wikipedia page Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

31 January 2024

• 04:2204:22, 31 January 2024 diff hist −146‎ Skateboard ‎ Removed sentence: "In postwar America, society was carefree with children commonly playing in the streets." I kind of get what its saying but its a very general claim that doesnt fit the NPOV. Could maybe be reintegrated with proper framing or rewording. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

29 January 2024

• 09:4209:42, 29 January 2024 diff hist +2‎ m Tomato soup ‎ minor typo fixes on my previous edit Tag: Visual edit
• 09:4109:41, 29 January 2024 diff hist −742‎ Tomato soup ‎ →‎History: Cleaned up the section on History by rewording the main content and removing extraneous information. Tag: Visual edit

26 January 2024

• 21:5421:54, 26 January 2024 diff hist +208‎ Super Size Me ‎ Changed the phrase "As a result" to "At the end of the experiment" which is more neutral. A single study is not enough to neutrally imply causation. I removed a sentence with a citation needed about how Spurlock lowered his weight. It might be possible to add it back in with proper citation or rephrasing if this is simply based on a statement by Spurlock or someone else. I have also added a sentence about the argument that Spurlock's alcohol consumption better describes his symptoms. I have at Tag: Visual edit: Switched

8 December 2023

• 00:3600:36, 8 December 2023 diff hist +3‎ m Metropolis (1927 film) ‎ rearranged the paragraphs so the discussion of the us copyright is not interrupted. For clarity. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

7 October 2023

• 04:5804:58, 7 October 2023 diff hist +44‎ Murder Drones ‎ Cleaned up the production section a bit. It needs more attention as a lot of the facts lack a sources and there are several run on sentences. The information could also be reorganized a bit. Hope I helped <3 Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit

27 July 2022

• 00:3000:30, 27 July 2022 diff hist +11‎ m Dead End: Paranormal Park ‎ →‎Premise: A bit of cleaning up for flow and grammar Tag: Visual edit

17 June 2022

• 20:1120:11, 17 June 2022 diff hist +172‎ Talk:Snufkin ‎No edit summary
• 20:0520:05, 17 June 2022 diff hist +86‎ Talk:Kit Yan ‎ →‎Plot and Content Summaries
• 20:0520:05, 17 June 2022 diff hist +242‎ Talk:Kit Yan ‎No edit summary
• 19:5819:58, 17 June 2022 diff hist −59‎ m Kit Yan ‎ →‎Theater: I just removed the opening sentence since it was redundant with the lead of the article. Hope this helps. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task Newcomer task: copyedit

27 March 2022

• 22:3722:37, 27 March 2022 diff hist +5‎ m Haizum ‎ added a missing preposition. Although it might make more sense for it to be 'on' or 'in' but I am not familiar with the material being discussed so I'm not sure. Tag: Visual edit

11 March 2022

• 02:4402:44, 11 March 2022 diff hist +12‎ m Powerhouse Animation Studios ‎ Rewording in Projects section. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task
• 02:3602:36, 11 March 2022 diff hist −7‎ m Midair (video game) ‎ Minor rewording in introductory paragraph. Tags: Manual revert Visual edit Newcomer task
• 02:3302:33, 11 March 2022 diff hist −13‎ m Mordheim ‎ Some rewording in the introductory section. Tags: Visual edit Newcomer task