User contributions for 85.193.242.133

17 September 2017

• 02:3302:33, 17 September 2017 diff hist +8‎ Laptop cooler ‎ "for your laptop" -> "for a particular laptop"

16 September 2017

• 17:1817:18, 16 September 2017 diff hist +1‎ Ain't ‎ "a perennial subject of" -> "a continuing subject of"; See plain English - readability counts

14 September 2017

• 00:2100:21, 14 September 2017 diff hist −3‎ Python (programming language) ‎ "as of" is ambiguous; see http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/as-of
• 00:1600:16, 14 September 2017 diff hist +3‎ Python (programming language) ‎ "as of" is ambiguous; see http://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/as-of

13 September 2017

• 21:2221:22, 13 September 2017 diff hist +24‎ Python (programming language) ‎ →‎Uses: +link to modular architecture
• 21:1121:11, 13 September 2017 diff hist +35‎ Scala (programming language) ‎ →‎History: now we can see WHERE the institute is located, without clicking the link
• 15:0915:09, 13 September 2017 diff hist +1‎ Python (programming language) ‎ ce: "module architecture" -> "modular architecture"

12 September 2017

• 05:3905:39, 12 September 2017 diff hist −3‎ Laptop ‎ →‎Security and privacy: "conceal" -> "hide" ; See plain English
• 04:4604:46, 12 September 2017 diff hist −12‎ Laptop ‎ →‎Security and privacy: ce: they are often stolen
• 03:5903:59, 12 September 2017 diff hist −33‎ Commodore International ‎ →‎Demise: chip but not disposable; "were perceived to be" is true, but obvious and redundant
• 03:3203:32, 12 September 2017 diff hist 0‎ Atari Corporation ‎ ce: rephrasing
• 03:0803:08, 12 September 2017 diff hist −8‎ ZX Spectrum ‎ "in excess of" -> "over"; See plain English
• 01:3301:33, 12 September 2017 diff hist +67‎ Disarmament ‎ you can abolish activity but not material objects; the article's lead completely changed; +source

11 September 2017

• 15:4315:43, 11 September 2017 diff hist −4‎ Gainful employment ‎ "consistent work" -> "steady work"; consistent also means "not self-contradicting", see consistency

9 September 2017

• 23:4423:44, 9 September 2017 diff hist +10‎ Utilitarianism ‎ the wording "all interests" without "people" was vague and ambiguous
• 19:0919:09, 9 September 2017 diff hist −286‎ Agave ‎ CORRECT pronunciation; redundant source removed Tag: references removed
• 18:2118:21, 9 September 2017 diff hist −4‎ Kim Han-sol ‎ "following" -> "after"; See plain English - readability counts

8 September 2017

• 04:3604:36, 8 September 2017 diff hist +308‎ User talk:Jnestorius ‎ →‎Talk:Pig in a poke#Ambiguous sentence: new section
• 04:3104:31, 8 September 2017 diff hist +308‎ User talk:Henry Flower ‎ →‎Talk:Pig in a poke#Ambiguous sentence: new section
• 04:0704:07, 8 September 2017 diff hist +1,318‎ Wikipedia:Reference desk/Language ‎ →‎"would actually contain" versus "actually used to contain": thanks

7 September 2017

• 04:3804:38, 7 September 2017 diff hist +180‎ Talk:Metaknowledge ‎ →‎Why I have deleted the TOGA metatheory
• 04:2604:26, 7 September 2017 diff hist +4‎ Talk:Metaknowledge ‎ →‎Why i have deleted the TOGA metatheory: ce: "i" -> "I"; + "the"
• 04:1004:10, 7 September 2017 diff hist −560‎ Metaknowledge ‎ the TOGA metatheory and resulting elements DELETED again; see this article's talk Tag: references removed

6 September 2017

• 16:1216:12, 6 September 2017 diff hist +811‎ Wikipedia:Reference desk/Language ‎ →‎"would actually contain" versus "actually used to contain"
• 14:2114:21, 6 September 2017 diff hist −1‎ Wikipedia:Reference desk/Language ‎ →‎"would actually contain" versus "actually used to contain": typo
• 14:1814:18, 6 September 2017 diff hist +1,201‎ Wikipedia:Reference desk/Language ‎ →‎"would actually contain" versus "actually used to contain": new section
• 03:2203:22, 6 September 2017 diff hist −1‎ Talk:Pig in a poke ‎ →‎Ambiguous sentence: ce: something -> anything
• 01:5401:54, 6 September 2017 diff hist +81‎ Talk:Pig in a poke ‎ →‎Ambiguous sentence: sometimes X did NOT contain Y
• 01:2801:28, 6 September 2017 diff hist +1,628‎ Talk:Pig in a poke ‎ →‎Ambiguous sentence: nonsense

5 September 2017

• 19:0619:06, 5 September 2017 diff hist +819‎ Talk:Pig in a poke ‎ →‎Ambiguous sentence: The verb "contain" is stative.
• 16:0016:00, 5 September 2017 diff hist +720‎ Talk:Pig in a poke ‎ →‎Ambiguous sentence