User contributions for 81.145.246.223

25 July 2011

• 19:1919:19, 25 July 2011 diff hist −17‎ George Newnes ‎ →‎Career: punctuation and arguably is not an adjective
• 19:1519:15, 25 July 2011 diff hist +15‎ Review of Reviews ‎ →‎The Review of Reviews: spelling, grammar, punctuation

24 July 2011

• 22:3922:39, 24 July 2011 diff hist +1‎ Wanne-Eickel–Hamburg railway ‎ →‎Bremen Freight Bypass and Mahndorf Curve: spelling
• 11:3711:37, 24 July 2011 diff hist +5‎ Edward Tyas Cook ‎ grammar
• 11:3511:35, 24 July 2011 diff hist +21‎ The Daily News (UK) ‎ The News absorbed the Morning Star, not the Morning Post

23 July 2011

• 21:0521:05, 23 July 2011 diff hist −419‎ Resolution of the Dreyfus affair ‎ →‎Pardon and amnesty: this is a very badly presented article: it is unclear, unencyclopedic in tone, and needs considerable revision in line with WP's policies
• 15:0715:07, 23 July 2011 diff hist −38‎ Surrey Theatre ‎ →‎History: grammar and punctuation

22 July 2011

• 18:2718:27, 22 July 2011 diff hist +284‎ Talk:Queen's Hall ‎ other uses

20 July 2011

• 20:3420:34, 20 July 2011 diff hist −81‎ Talk:Mary Robinson (poet) ‎ she was a poet, not a sex worker
• 12:0512:05, 20 July 2011 diff hist −2‎ William Barnes Rhodes ‎ rewrote text and added links
• 11:2611:26, 20 July 2011 diff hist +4‎ Bombastes Furioso ‎ →‎Plot: missing "and", without which sentence is ungrammatical
• 09:4109:41, 20 July 2011 diff hist 0‎ William Harcourt (politician) ‎ Harcourt resigned as Liberal leader in the Commons on 8 December 1898. C-B was elected on 6 Feb 1899 (per DNB)
• 09:1609:16, 20 July 2011 diff hist +434‎ William Harcourt (politician) ‎ provided citations for family background and remove "citation needed" from the ref to Harcourt interpolation -- only a total idiot asks for a citation when there's a WP article on the subject

18 July 2011

• 22:4522:45, 18 July 2011 diff hist −3‎ John Bull's Adventures in the Fiscal Wonderland ‎ bad grammar
• 15:2415:24, 18 July 2011 diff hist −23‎ Snow rugby ‎ no edits for 44 hours so tag no longer appropriate
• 13:5313:53, 18 July 2011 diff hist 0‎ Lucan ‎ don't change AD to CE without good reason
• 13:4813:48, 18 July 2011 diff hist +103‎ Bingley Hall ‎ Chamberlain's speech
• 11:1311:13, 18 July 2011 diff hist +107‎ Ne supra crepidam ‎ correcting account in Pliny
• 08:5508:55, 18 July 2011 diff hist −1‎ Aeschylus ‎ →‎Influence outside of Greek Culture: A critic ... has (not have)
• 08:5008:50, 18 July 2011 diff hist +3‎ Aeschylus ‎ commas
• 08:4908:49, 18 July 2011 diff hist 0‎ Aeschylus ‎ →‎Life: If the article uses BC, it should also use AD, not CE
• 08:4708:47, 18 July 2011 diff hist +1‎ Aeschylus ‎ 'This' is preferable to 'His' here

17 July 2011

• 10:4810:48, 17 July 2011 diff hist +35‎ Lake County, Illinois ‎ all these references to Lake and "shorefront", without naming the lake -- bloody stupid!
• 10:4510:45, 17 July 2011 diff hist −9‎ Zion, Illinois ‎ don't need to keep referring to Dowie as "Dr" nor abbreviate Road to Rd.
• 10:4010:40, 17 July 2011 diff hist +291‎ Talk:Zion, Illinois ‎ Date
• 10:3310:33, 17 July 2011 diff hist −4‎ John Alexander Dowie ‎ →‎Biography: travelling is a verb, not a noun