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1 January 2010
- 19:3319:33, 1 January 2010 diff hist +44 Eliza Dushku →Personal life: minor tweak for clarification in one sentence.
6 November 2009
- 05:5505:55, 6 November 2009 diff hist +1,167 Talk:9-12 Project →Criticism: next time you're planning to rework a section, don't just delete it outright before you rework it... just rework it, it keeps the edit history more straightforward, etc.
- 05:4605:46, 6 November 2009 diff hist +34 9-12 Project →National events: slightly more neutral wording, plus a minor grammar fix and removal of a redundancy (you don't need to say "9/12ers" twice when the subject is clear :) ).
4 November 2009
- 04:2904:29, 4 November 2009 diff hist +444 Talk:New York's 23rd congressional district →Location?
31 October 2009
- 05:4405:44, 31 October 2009 diff hist −3 Belonging (Dollhouse) →Reviews: grammar fixes.
27 October 2009
- 23:1123:11, 27 October 2009 diff hist +1,034 Talk:21st Century Breakdown →This band is not "Alternative": ... "alternative" is neither wrong nor right
- 22:5222:52, 27 October 2009 diff hist +2,203 Talk:21st Century Breakdown →Genre: common sense and genre labels...
- 22:3022:30, 27 October 2009 diff hist +765 Talk:21st Century Breakdown →Article issues: there's a big difference between "structure" and "style"
- 22:2322:23, 27 October 2009 diff hist +1,329 Talk:21st Century Breakdown →Right Lyrics: for future reference, you can just Google for the lyrics... ;)
- 22:0922:09, 27 October 2009 diff hist +2,091 Talk:21st Century Breakdown →Unable to Rip Album Fully: be civil, por favor
21 September 2009
- 05:3505:35, 21 September 2009 diff hist −39 Berserker →Theories on the causes of the berserkergang: "Does not cite ANY sources" tag no longer makes sense when the very first paragraph has two fantastically detailed citations. STILL needs work,though
25 August 2009
- 00:5600:56, 25 August 2009 diff hist +2 Canon (fiction) →Nature of fictional canons: since the term "fanon" is introduced here without explanation and it is the first appearance on the page, it should be in quotes
- 00:5200:52, 25 August 2009 diff hist +2 Canon (fiction) whoops! In fixing awkward sentences I '''made''' an awkward sentence. Sorry. Fixed it.
- 00:4500:45, 25 August 2009 diff hist +503 Canon (fiction) tweaks here and there, including a couple of grammatical clarifications
1 July 2009
- 04:3804:38, 1 July 2009 diff hist +1,807 Talk:List of Fables characters Eliza Wall and Deux Ex Machina - on the list yet or not?
- 04:1304:13, 1 July 2009 diff hist +58 1001 Nights of Snowfall →What You Wish For: minor prose tweaks
- 04:1104:11, 1 July 2009 diff hist +104 1001 Nights of Snowfall →The Witch's Tale
- 04:0904:09, 1 July 2009 diff hist +15 1001 Nights of Snowfall →Diaspora: edits for encyclopedic tone, etc.
- 04:0604:06, 1 July 2009 diff hist −37 1001 Nights of Snowfall →A Mother's Love: minor prose tweaks
- 04:0504:05, 1 July 2009 diff hist +25 1001 Nights of Snowfall →The Christmas Pies: minor prose tweak
- 04:0404:04, 1 July 2009 diff hist +114 1001 Nights of Snowfall →The Fencing Lessons: more encyclopedic tone, more consistent tenses, etc.
- 03:5703:57, 1 July 2009 diff hist +46 1001 Nights of Snowfall →A Frog's Eye View: prose improvement. Fixed typo "kissed by his wife's kiss", etc
26 May 2009
- 05:0005:00, 26 May 2009 diff hist +5 Dichen Lachman →Current roles: moderately awkward grammar fixed ("was cast" technically says something diff. from "plays the part of"). Also: please stop italicizing character names, as you're not supposed to
- 04:5704:57, 26 May 2009 diff hist +1 Dichen Lachman →Career: grammar fix; misplaced comma mades the mermaid movie Aquamarine sound like it's actually a spinoff of an Australian soap opera... yeah, fixed that.. Also character names don't nd italics!
- 04:5104:51, 26 May 2009 diff hist +9 Dollhouse (TV series) →Critical response: third paragraph grammar/phrasing tweak- 1st and 2nd sentence tenses did not agree very well in prev. version, creating an awkward flow - + tweaked for slightly more encyc. tone
22 May 2009
- 03:2803:28, 22 May 2009 diff hist +2 Wikipedia:WikiProject Television/Assessment →Requesting an assessment: fixed closed italics code, sorry about that
- 03:2603:26, 22 May 2009 diff hist +577 Wikipedia:WikiProject Television/Assessment →Requesting an assessment: Dollhouse - might it be better than Start class now? Has a lot of refs and citations, decent amount of info + decent organization now
- 03:1003:10, 22 May 2009 diff hist +2 Dollhouse (TV series) whoops! I meant to put the "Season two" subsection under "Production"! Fixed now.
- 03:0703:07, 22 May 2009 diff hist +353 Dollhouse (TV series) →Production: having trouble verifying the E! Online link, could someone find a permalink? Also, may want to reformat the thrfeed.com ref, as it's used higher on pg; I don't know how to reuse cites
- 02:5402:54, 22 May 2009 diff hist +1,290 Talk:Dollhouse (TV series) →Season Two
- 02:3702:37, 22 May 2009 diff hist +12 Dollhouse (TV series) →International airings: grammar and punctuation fix/tweak on note about airing in France.
17 May 2009
- 11:4611:46, 17 May 2009 diff hist +487 Dollhouse (TV series) →Issues With the 13th Episode: note w/ ref on reported renewal status + status of ep. 13 airing/premiere. PEOPLE: Please check on official status of renewal on Monday and update page so we're accu
- 11:1311:13, 17 May 2009 diff hist +2,622 Echo (Dollhouse) →In the Dollhouse: tweaks, minor additions, including a couple of verb tense fixes, sentence clarification and better notation of which episode which information is pulled from,
- 10:1810:18, 17 May 2009 diff hist +45 Echo (Dollhouse) →Before the Dollhouse: minor tweaks to keep encyclopedic tone and avoid slightly awkward grammar in a spot or two
- 09:5709:57, 17 May 2009 diff hist +1,238 Dollhouse (TV series) →Production: updated first portions of sec. to reflect current status inc. changing some verb tenses 2 proper form (inc.changing "will air" to "has aired", etc) +new source for new piece of info