User contributions for 24.56.77.201

20 June 2024

• 06:4706:47, 20 June 2024 diff hist +3‎ Microfauna ‎ →‎Habitat: Changed "Many microfauna inhabit soil habitats such as nematodes." to "Many microfauna, such as nematodes, inhabit soil habitats." Habitats, in this case, aren't nematodes; some microfauna are nematodes.

5 June 2024

• 06:0006:00, 5 June 2024 diff hist +178‎ Cheating in video games ‎ →‎Saved game editors: Appended " -- allowing the player to pick up the item repeatedly, gaining multiple instances of the item, if the program's logic does not prevent them from having more than one of the item." to the end of the last paragraph, to explain explicitly why the described use of mixed save files is desirable.

21 May 2024

• 10:5310:53, 21 May 2024 diff hist 0‎ FBI season 6 ‎ changed listed "number of episodes" in the summary table from 12 to 13, since 13 episodes are listed by name further down in the article. Tag: Reverted

20 May 2024

• 08:0508:05, 20 May 2024 diff hist +849‎ S.W.A.T. (2017 TV series) season 7 ‎ →‎Development: Added news of Season 8 renewal, with citations. (If I didn't do the citations quite right, please help by fixing as needed; I copied from other examples here, replacing fields; but this is my first time doing citations.)

26 March 2024

• 07:5607:56, 26 March 2024 diff hist +1‎ Lenkov-verse ‎ →‎Television: Added the missing opening quotation marks in "a Tweet which read, "Anyone call".
• 07:5507:55, 26 March 2024 diff hist +1‎ Lenkov-verse ‎ →‎Television: I replaced the period with a comma in "take advantage of that," Lenkov told the press". When the sentence *continues* at the end of a quotation, any period before the closing quotation marks must be replaced with a comma. I also added the closing parenthesis at the end of "actor Jorge Garcia (of ''Five-0'')".
• 07:1807:18, 26 March 2024 diff hist +10‎ Lenkov-verse ‎ →‎Cast and characters: Replaced a use of "Manetti" with the full name "Larry Manetti" and link. Tag: Reverted
• 07:1407:14, 26 March 2024 diff hist +22‎ Lenkov-verse ‎ →‎Cast and characters: Fixed the Al Harrington link. It was pointing to an article about someone else with the same name; it now points to the appropriate person, the actor who portrayed the character discussed.
• 07:0807:08, 26 March 2024 diff hist +1‎ Lenkov-verse ‎ →‎Cast and characters: I added the missing comma at the end of the phrase ", who stars as Duke Lukela in ''Five-0'' and ''Magnum''".
• 07:0607:06, 26 March 2024 diff hist +3‎ Lenkov-verse ‎ →‎Cast and characters: I broke the single sentence about Jack Lord into a compound sentence, without changing facts; this change makes it a bit easier to process the multiple facts presented.
• 07:0007:00, 26 March 2024 diff hist +2‎ Lenkov-verse ‎ →‎Cast and characters: I simply added a couple of commas to the sentence about Jack Lord, and moved the name "Jack Lord" to follow the phrase "who played the original Steve McGarrett", so that it is even easier to parse and understand what was written.

19 March 2024

• 05:3905:39, 19 March 2024 diff hist −3‎ My Neighbor Adolf ‎ →‎Plot: I replace "forged" with "faked" in the phrase "faked his own death"; it's the correct word in the vernacular. Objects are forged, and deaths are faked. current

8 March 2024

• 09:4609:46, 8 March 2024 diff hist +49‎ Dobbs v. Jackson Women's Health Organization ‎ →‎Constitutional right: NO CHANGE TO FACTS. I added the words after "health exception" to this sentence: "Post-viability abortion restrictions under state law were still required to contain a health exception allowing abortions under specified circumstances." It just clarifies that the exception is an exception to restrictions: "[...]restrictions were required to contain a[n ...] exceptions." Tag: Visual edit: Switched

26 February 2024

• 10:1410:14, 26 February 2024 diff hist +17‎ ROM cartridge ‎ Fixed the caption for the photo of the Magnavox Odyssey jumper card, which was not a ROM cartridge, having no ROM or other chips. Tag: Visual edit

21 December 2023

• 11:2311:23, 21 December 2023 diff hist +125‎ Tag (game) ‎ →‎Kick the can: Added "The player who is "it" must replace the can on its designated spot before they can resume chasing and tagging other players." which is the second point of kicking the can, besides freeing prisoners.

11 September 2023

• 07:1207:12, 11 September 2023 diff hist +11‎ Ocean Guardian ‎ →‎Testing and research: I added "There were" at the start of "There were a total of 297 successful trials [...]" to make it a complete sentence.
• 06:4406:44, 11 September 2023 diff hist +5‎ Diana Nyad ‎ →‎Second attempt: added "with" in front of "a CNN news team on board". (The sentence was already grammatically correct. This just makes it easier to parse correctly, given its length and number of phrases.)

6 September 2023

• 11:0111:01, 6 September 2023 diff hist −4‎ Bullfighter ‎ →‎History: I gave a more precise English translation for ''más cornadas da el hambre'' than "there's more goring from hunger".

26 August 2023

• 09:4209:42, 26 August 2023 diff hist +3‎ Tinkle Pit ‎ →‎Gameplay: Replaced "therefore" with "thereby", leaving the better phrase "thereby creating a line between them and their balls." Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

23 August 2023

• 09:3009:30, 23 August 2023 diff hist +6‎ Helena G. Wells ‎ replaced comma with semi-colon, added the word "this", added missing period after "H.G" near the end of the sentence Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

24 March 2023

• 10:0510:05, 24 March 2023 diff hist +619‎ Talk:List of Batwoman characters ‎ →‎Change the article's title to make it immediately clear that it refers to the CW TV series.: new section Tag: New topic

18 October 2022

• 07:1007:10, 18 October 2022 diff hist +2‎ 1983 Code of Canon Law ‎ →‎2021 revisions: Changed "There is no freely given sexual consent for people deemed capable of consenting." -> changed "capable" to "incapable". IN-capable

17 October 2022

• 08:2208:22, 17 October 2022 diff hist +45‎ Saint Dyfnog ‎ →‎Saint Dyfnog's Well: Added the name of the organization that listed the well as a Grade II Listed Building current

11 October 2022

• 05:4205:42, 11 October 2022 diff hist +5‎ Zipper (ride) ‎ →‎Ride Specifications: Corrected the word "logistics" with the word "specifications", in the section title, for simple accuracy. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

10 October 2022

• 09:5609:56, 10 October 2022 diff hist +24‎ Invincible (comics) ‎ →‎Plot synopsis: In the second paragraph, first sentence was not structured well, grammatically. I split it into two sentences without changing the meaning, so that it reads smoothly.

29 August 2022

• 06:4406:44, 29 August 2022 diff hist +2‎ Baron Munchausen ‎ →‎Nomenclature: Added line breaks to separate the final two, unrelated, sentences into two separate paragraphs.

27 August 2022

• 07:3407:34, 27 August 2022 diff hist +724‎ Talk:Fletch (film) ‎ →‎2022 Fletch movie, "Confess, Fletch": new section Tag: New topic
• 07:2807:28, 27 August 2022 diff hist −1‎ Fletch Won ‎ ~~~ changed "novels" to "novel" in the first sentence; it is one novel, not multiple novels.

26 July 2022

• 07:4207:42, 26 July 2022 diff hist +3‎ They/Them (film) ‎ →‎Premise: Changed "fend for themselves from" to "fend for themselves against". This is the standard English usage. Tag: Visual edit

16 June 2022

• 08:2608:26, 16 June 2022 diff hist +1,442‎ Talk:Time crystal ‎ →‎Are the 2017 experiment results actually time crystals? [I am asking, not answering, *in case* revision is needed.]: new section

2 June 2022

• 10:1410:14, 2 June 2022 diff hist +286‎ Legends of Tomorrow season 7 ‎ →‎Episodes: As the top of the article states, the SERIES ends with episode 13; I added that fact to the ep. 13 description because it ends with a cliff-hanger, so that people coming here to find out if there is another episode, as I did, will find out -- even if they skip to the end of the episode list without reading anything else. Tag: Visual edit

21 April 2022

• 09:1409:14, 21 April 2022 diff hist +92‎ List of NCIS episodes ‎ →‎Season 19 (2021–22): Added crossover note that isn't included in table of episodes. I don't know how to find "{{:NCIS (season 19)}}" to edit that table directly. The note is included in the main Season 19 article and its episode list, and a similar note is in the Episode List article for NCIS Hawaii. It should really be in the table here, but this is the best that *I* can do for readers; I hope someone else will do the better thing for us. :)

22 February 2022

• 08:1108:11, 22 February 2022 diff hist +23‎ Children of Time (novel) ‎ →‎Dr. Avrana Kern: Clarified that Dr Avrana Kern was in suspended animation, and thus, not awake, active, or influential, during most of her time above the planet. Tags: Mobile edit Mobile web edit

14 December 2021

• 11:1611:16, 14 December 2021 diff hist +84‎ Dune (2021 film) ‎ →‎Promotion: Added, "Notably, none of the trailers revealed the fact that the film was only "Part One"." to the end.
• 11:1411:14, 14 December 2021 diff hist +58‎ Dune (2021 film) ‎ ~~~

15 November 2021

• 08:3308:33, 15 November 2021 diff hist 0‎ List of films with post-credits scenes ‎ →‎2020s: "Phineas and Ferb the Movie: Candace Against the Universe entry: moved a comma from after "with Linda" to before "with Linda". Now the sentence is sensible, and gramatically correct.
• 08:2108:21, 15 November 2021 diff hist −5‎ List of films with post-credits scenes ‎ →‎2020s: "Eternals" entry: replaced "questions" with "asks", so that it reads better. (But if the voice actually "questions whether he is ready for it", without asking him, then use that phrase instead.)

4 October 2021

• 07:5807:58, 4 October 2021 diff hist +10‎ Just Add Magic (TV series) ‎ →‎Just Add Magic: Mystery City (2020): added "the world" to the end of the final sentence, which had just ended at "throughout"..

12 January 2021

• 07:2407:24, 12 January 2021 diff hist +6‎ Die Hard (film series) ‎ →‎Source material for the films: I just added the word "which" in the penultimate paragraph's last sentence, for better readability (parallel structure in the grammar).

14 November 2020

• 07:5507:55, 14 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ Jayde Adams ‎ →‎Career: Just changed "competitively had danced" to "had danced competitively" to make it read more naturally with the exact same meaning.
• 07:5407:54, 14 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ Jayde Adams ‎ Undid revision 988621690 by 24.56.77.201 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 07:5307:53, 14 November 2020 diff hist 0‎ Jayde Adams ‎ →‎Career: ~~~ Just changed "competitively had danced" to Tag: Reverted

8 November 2020

• 12:2712:27, 8 November 2020 diff hist +1‎ Donald J. Trump Foundation ‎ →‎Failure to make pledged 9/11 grants: I just added missing closing quotation marks to the last sentence of the first paragraph: "to benefit the families of firefighters and police officers who died in the attacks."

7 July 2020

• 08:5008:50, 7 July 2020 diff hist +4‎ Safehold ‎ Added the word "and" in the second paragraph, after "curiosity". Curiosity Forbids nothing.

27 May 2020

• 07:3507:35, 27 May 2020 diff hist +8‎ 1927 World Series ‎ changed "swept" to "won, sweeping" in the sentence about the Yankees winning the 1927 World Series. Baseball fans might know that sweeping implies winning; but the article should make it clear for all, so they don't have to think to look up that term, and look it up, to find out who won that series.
• 07:3207:32, 27 May 2020 diff hist +5‎ 1927 New York Yankees season ‎ Replaced an instance of "World Series" with "1927 World Series" to make it absolutely clear right there; even though the article is about one year's line-up of a team.
• 07:3007:30, 27 May 2020 diff hist +8‎ 1927 New York Yankees season ‎ changed "swept" to "won, sweeping" in the sentence about the 1927 World Series. Baseball fans might know that sweeping implies winning; but the article should make it clear for all, so they don't have to think to look up that term, and look it up, to find out who won that series.

15 February 2020

• 09:4209:42, 15 February 2020 diff hist +298‎ Blacksmith (character) ‎ →‎In other media: Just fixed some clarity issues, especially with pronoun usage; reworded the sentence beginning with "After gaining the power to" so that it was a little bit more specific and reads better; added a sentence about how she keeps the shards, as a gauntlet and in a bucket.
• 09:2409:24, 15 February 2020 diff hist −11‎ Blacksmith (character) ‎ →‎In other media: replaced "crime lord crime lord" with just "crime lord", fixing an accidental repetition of words.

7 February 2020

• 10:4010:40, 7 February 2020 diff hist +542‎ N Talk:List of SEAL Team episodes ‎ ~~~ Question about production codes for season 3 episodes 11/12